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The Unwanted Writings

The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.

Rules:
(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

Polishers
[Your Favorite Stranger]
[hh]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!

Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.

I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.

[ninja.kicks.ass]

Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.

[nokaredes]

Pain

You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]

Who

What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING AT ME!

I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]

That Instant

As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.

Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.

I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.

Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.

In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.

Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.

All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.

I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.

But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.

Written by [Moving on in Life]

I Did

Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did

started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did

loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did

a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did

trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did

sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't

nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

Written by [evil penguin]

The other side

A bully once came up to me
Came up to me and said

"Give me all your lunch money,
Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"

In shock and awe and horrendous fear
I forked over all my cash

I couldn't help but ask myself
"why was he so harsh?"

Now I stand, just right here
Down an empty hall

With someone's colloar in my fist,
And his back against the wall

One side tells me to beat him up
Because that's half the fun

But the other side screams
"drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"

SO quickly I make a simple choice,
As I lower him to the ground

I let him go and watch him run
Because a new path I have found

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Untitled

Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]

Peace

I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace

Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]

Imagine

Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.

Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.

Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]

Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]

Sorry everyone, but this page has ran out of room. Please add all future poetry to More Unwanted Writings. Thanks.

Alright people, here you have your banners link:TUW Banners. Also, to anyone who made a banner for TUW, please go and add your name under your banner.
Thanks,
[Your Favorite Stranger]

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: *hands time another fortune cookie and pokes some chinese guys and watches them squeel*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *opens the fortune cookey and reads the fortune* "today, you shall poke the emperor" huh. weird *pokes a fat chinese guy in bunches of silk robes riding in a tent* heh

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: *opens another cookie and reads*"today time is touchable" ok!*pokes time*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh yummers...*tries to fend off pokes, but falls back through the hole* wahhhhh....

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: *continues to try to poke time, but falls in the hole after her* dang, i liked chinaaaaa

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *finally falls back out into america* damn, i like traveling! *sits up right as katie falls on her* oomph!

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: *gets off of time* oops, im sorry. i wonder if i can go someplace else *pulls out a map and starts looking for a place to point to*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *stands up grumbling* it's ok..where ever you want to go i'm pretty sure we can fly *pops back*

2005-05-25 [evil penguin]: ok *pokes france*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *blinks and suddenly, we're hanging off the eiffel tower* whoops let me fix my image *fixes the imga and we're inside the eiffel tower* there we go

2005-05-25 [Moving on in Life]: *pokes France and shows up at the bottom of the Eiffel Tower, and pokes it*

2005-05-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks down* uh oh *the Tower begins to shake* Houston, we have a problem!

2005-05-25 [Moving on in Life]: * Let's the tower fall, and placing himself to catch time and Katie, Cause he loves em like that**

2005-05-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you* thank you! *gets down and curtsies* you must be awful strong to catch us both...*fluttering eyelashes* j/k bout the eyelash thing

2005-05-26 [Moving on in Life]: *Flexes muscles* Yes I am!...ok not really, but I can catch you both :D

2005-05-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *watches you sardonically* yeah i see those pillows...just kidding...well i believe you, seeing as you have already backed that up *a diet coke and a pizza appear* *groans* this is all benj's fault...well, now i need help with this pizza...care to try that, mr strong man?

2005-05-26 [evil penguin]: *looks at the pizza from terini's arms* hey put me down, im hungry!

2005-05-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *walks in from a cafe in france with a crissonat* hey....pizza!*throws crossiant away*

2005-05-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh boy...*gestures hand and two more boxes of pizza appear* there we are! wait we are in need of a table *table and a couple bean bags appear*

2005-05-26 [Moving on in Life]: *jokingly kisses katie's cheek* ok, you. but save some for me

2005-05-26 [tenshi-ryuu]: *steals table* Hah... Catch me if you can...

2005-05-26 [Moving on in Life]: *catches tenshi-ryuu with his tenchi-ryuu catching powers* Got you!

2005-05-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good job terini!! *ties tenshi to a chair* now, no more stealing tables or anything else do you hear? *shaking fist under your nose*

2005-05-27 [tenshi-ryuu]: heh... loud and clear *bites [Your Favorite Stranger]'s fist*

2005-05-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: goo-OWWW!! *growls and the chair is upside down now with you still sitting in it. it starts shaking back and forth very rapidly*

2005-05-28 [tenshi-ryuu]: AAAAH!!! IM SORRY!!!...

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: you had better be..*rubs hand* you left bite marks...*chair stops shaking and returns to it's normal position*

2005-05-28 [tenshi-ryuu]: Danke... Lets Eat ^_^

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: denada...yes lets! *hands out pizza*

2005-05-28 [evil penguin]: yay pizza! *kisses everyone on the cheek because pizza is great, then does the happy dance*

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *forgets the pizza after seeing the katie's happy dance* oh boy! we haven't happy danced in a while! *does her own happy dance, which is alot like Katie's but different*

2005-05-28 [tenshi-ryuu]: *eats pizza while no-ones looking*

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: go ahead tenshi, have the whole thing *watches you eat it and smirks* but you may end up with a more painful than normal tummy ache, cause it's cursed

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ok doky people, we know have a banners wiki thing: TUW Banners that ought to be it. also, for anyone who submited one of the banners, please go there and put your name under your graphic! thanks!

2005-05-28 [evil penguin]: yay banners *continues to happy dance with time, while stealing pizza from tenshi*

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yes! *continues happy dance, but it gets faster and faster, with swirls and jumps, until finally she builds up enough speed to steal tenshi*

2005-05-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: grrr!! i am mad at the DP!! very mad

2005-05-29 [Ego Diligo Tu]: why???

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ...because, they're...just GRR!! anus dwelling buttmonkies!!! they're rude! i cannot stand rude mean people! ask [hh] what they said one day

2005-05-29 [Ego Diligo Tu]: jsust tell me

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ok, there was this one poem with quite a few errors in it. it was taken out for having errors, and thisone person goes "thank god! that horrible excuse for a poem was removed!" and i got really ticked

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: and none of the bosses did anything about that comment until me and LIAO made comments. then they removed the whole thing. they ouht to delete things like that right off

2005-05-29 [evil penguin]: people are so rude sometimes. they dont stop to think that if someone said that about their poetry theyd be a bit hurt.

2005-05-29 [Moving on in Life]: *punches Tenshi for biting his friend, and doin all other stuff said above(if anything else)

2005-05-29 [Moving on in Life]: And yes, there are MANY rude people in the world. I've been told outright that my poems are resembleant to that of a five year-old's homemade poem to his/her parents! (I personally thing those little kiddy poems are awesome) I had to severely resist the urge to punch the guy right there.

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ...you shouldn't have resisted...but that really wouldn't have helped...still...

2005-05-29 [tenshi-ryuu]: ya... I need to write more... my brain stopped being productive while my school work has taken over...

2005-05-29 [Moving on in Life]: lol

2005-05-29 [evil penguin]: lol, i know what you mean tenshi. between final exams and work, i have no time for anyting anymore, let alone writing

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i was the same way for my last exams...i hate thiose things

2005-05-29 [tenshi-ryuu]: ah... exams for me are still two weeks off... its summatives and final projects that are killing me... they're (in some cases) worth almost as much as the exams... then I have to study for exams and do them...

2005-05-29 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *winces* oww. that's a lot to do

2005-05-30 [tenshi-ryuu]: ya... I hope I'll survive... I feel so overwhelmed its not funny (which causes my stress to rise, not letting me concentrate, and not letting me complete stuff cause I can't focus... And the cycle repeates)

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: < focus is such a hard thing to do when under stress. i hope you survive too!

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: wow, i would hate to have that much work at the end of the year. thankfully all of my teachers do their big projects around february. but i am so stressed right now cus i though my best friend killed himself tonight

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh my gosh!! that's...horrible!!!

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: ya, i freaked out

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: well yeah! what happened?

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: well, his family was over at his house 4 a cook out, and he got mad at his parents cus they were lying to his relatives and saying i was dating him, which is absurd because he is gay. so i almost rear ended him on my way 2 the movies witha nother friend, so he pulled into a parking lot and told me all this and he was looking all weird and told me to try 2 call him after the movie. well i tried and he didnt answer, then i drove by his house cus its on my way home and his car wasnt there. so i freaked, but he called me and we met in a park and talked for like an hour

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: parents are the cause of so much trouble....but they only try to help i think ....well at least he was ok then

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: ya. i dunno, our talk was really depressing. it was all about how after this year we will like almost never see eachother because of college and everything

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh beautiful...i hope he's ok

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: i hope he is 2. we have plans to go see star wars this afternoon because hayden is so hott, so im guessing hes fine, lol

2005-05-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol sounds like a wonderful idea to me! no one can be depressed after seeing that movie! tell me how it went after you see it!

2005-05-30 [evil penguin]: o we had an excellent time! after the movie we went and got coffees and sat in the park, so it was a good afternoon

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh good! how was the movie?

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: star wars is always great. im such a loser

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: true. why?

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: because ive seen it 3 times, lol

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol i have a friend who's seeing it 4 times so don't feel bad. did you cry at all?

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: o yes, every time hayden goes up in flames. its such a waste of a beautiful face

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: watse of a beautiful body too...i cried pretty much from the time he vowed to Albino, to the end

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: lol, yea. my best friend has pictures of him all over his locker. its like a shrine to him and the guys from day after tomarrow and eurotrip

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol my friends the same way with her room

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: well with me its just my closet

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol...i haven't found the perfect poster yet, but when i do, it shall be in the most prominnt spo in my room!!!

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: i never buy posters, i prefer the more creative colage making myself

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: eh, it's my one and only hobbie really...i'm not that artsie creative, or i would do that myself

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: oh im no artist, im just bored a lot

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol well whatever works..i don't really enjoy making collages...i have to have everyhing in a certai order and straight, but i enjoy looking at them!

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: well i love disorder in general. u know we are having 2 completely differnt conversations on 2 different pages?

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: it all depends on what kind of disorder, really. yeah, i know...weird huh?

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: very weird. hey everybody, theres a party going on at more unwanted writings, come join it! *laughs because im advertising*

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hell, i own this place (not really, just on the papers) go ahead and advertise! it's only our second page, and no one wants to miss this!

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: exactly

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: so technically, it's not advertising, it's inviting

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: and every1 likes invitations

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yup yup!

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: lol

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh my gosh...

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: what?

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol i do not know

2005-05-31 [evil penguin]: lol, i know what u mean

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh good!

2005-05-31 [Moving on in Life]: JEEZ! Everyone here types too fast!

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *thinks* i don't type that fast

2005-05-31 [Moving on in Life]: I type fast, but I'm gettinmg left in the dust here! Slow down!

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks around* i don' see anyone else

2005-05-31 [tenshi-ryuu]: <(' '<) <- Kirby

2005-05-31 [Moving on in Life]: Kirby ROCKS! *inhales alot of air like kirby, and then turns purple*

2005-05-31 [tenshi-ryuu]: *pokes and explodes [Moving on in Life]*

2005-05-31 [Moving on in Life]: *explodes* KA-BOOM!*pulls hinmself back together off the ground, and is frighteningly pale, due to lack of blood, which is all over the ground around him* WHEE!...I'm dizzy..*passes out*

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *cathches him before he hits the ground* tenshi, i will deal with you later! for now help me help him!!

2005-05-31 [tenshi-ryuu]: Ok... *Helps [Your Favorite Stranger]*

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: thanks. we need you to get that table right there*nods at the table*...after that i think i can help him

2005-05-31 [tenshi-ryuu]: *gets table*

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh bother how do we lift him up there without hurting him worse? well we'll just have to be very careful *looks at you* ready?

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh nuts, how do we get him onto the table without hurting him worse? well we'll just have to be careful *looks at you* ready?

2005-05-31 [tenshi-ryuu]: Uh-huh... on three... one... two... THREE! *heaves [Moving on in Life] onto table*

2005-05-31 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good, good..thanks tenshi...now just stand somewhere...*focuses attention on terini, closing eyes and placing hands lightly over his worst wounds**concentrates hard on the wounds*

2005-06-01 [Moving on in Life]: *moans in semi-pain, as he cannot feel anything else*

2005-06-01 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *opens one eye to look at the wounds, then shuts it again for one last try*

2005-06-01 [Moving on in Life]: ((Why don't YOU work the miracle in type...I'm not good at saving lives...lol))

2005-06-01 [Your Favorite Stranger]: ((shutup!)) *body shudders with the effort, but the wonds heal themselves up**faints*

2005-06-01 [evil penguin]: wow, i missed a lot apparently

2005-06-01 [Your Favorite Stranger]: yeah, like tenshi exploded terini, so i had to put him back together

2005-06-01 [Moving on in Life]: I'm back together!..sorta..*finger hangs loosely from one string of flesh* wee! Looky there! *points at bad finger with good finger* He he! *pushes the dangling finger back and forth* it's like a dangling booger! *feels light-headed*

2005-06-02 [evil penguin]: wow, thats icky *pokes at finger too*

2005-06-02 [Your Favorite Stranger]: terini!! sit back down, before you hurt yourself! *pushes you back onto the table and sews up your finger* there. now just sit there

2005-06-03 [evil penguin]: damn, i was having fun

2005-06-03 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *shakes head* uhn uh...not with this patient. he's the first i've successfully fixed and he's going to stay that way!

2005-06-03 [tenshi-ryuu]: *unfixes tirini and sticks tongue out at forgotten_time*

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *whacks tenshi over the head, making him bite his tongue*

2005-06-04 [Moving on in Life]: *sits back down* Sorry

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *nods at you* it alright

2005-06-04 [Moving on in Life]: umm...can you scratch my nose? it itches.....please? *does his best puppy dog eyes in his condition*

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* sure...where?

2005-06-04 [Moving on in Life]: right on the tip.....

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *scratches you noe right on the tip* that good?

2005-06-04 [Moving on in Life]: Yup! that's much better!

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good

2005-06-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: *pokes [Your Favorite Stranger]*

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *turns on you and grabs your writsts* oh yes, i still have to take care of you don't i?

2005-06-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: Uh-huh *smiles innocently*

2005-06-04 [Your Favorite Stranger]: OooO you are such a tease! *lets go* git!

2005-06-04 [tenshi-ryuu]: *vanishes*

2005-06-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: thank you!

2005-06-05 [evil penguin]: whoa, he just poofed! *looks around for tenshi*

2005-06-05 [tenshi-ryuu]: *appears behind [evil penguin]* Boo!

2005-06-05 [Your Favorite Stranger]: she's gonna kill you! yay saves me the effort

2005-06-05 [tenshi-ryuu]: nah.... I'll vanish again

2005-06-06 [evil penguin]: *thinks to self: thats what he thinks...and runs up behind tenshi with a spork*

2005-06-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: O.o sporks!!

2005-06-06 [evil penguin]: i always said id kill someone with a spork someday

2005-06-06 [Moving on in Life]: *watches helplessly as he cannot move to help evil penguin in the fight to kill tenshi* GO EVIL!

2005-06-06 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good boy! yeah: COME ON EVIL!!!

2005-06-06 [evil penguin]: *jabs the spork in tenshis neck, but it doesnt go through* BLAST U EVIL SPORK!

2005-06-06 [tenshi-ryuu]: *vanishes again*

2005-06-07 [The 5 Elements]: lol, u idiot

2005-06-07 [evil penguin]: who? me or mr. poofy?

2005-06-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i say mr. poofy

2005-06-07 [tenshi-ryuu]: *reappears on the table* Ok... I'm done poofing now...

2005-06-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: good

2005-06-07 [evil penguin]: damn, then i cant call u mr. poofy anymore

2005-06-07 [tenshi-ryuu]: nah... but I have many other nicknames like "The Brain", "The Koala Kid", "Chris the Koala Kahle", "Kaveman", and I guess now "Mr. Poofy"

2005-06-07 [evil penguin]: well i like mr. poofy, it sounds cute and cuddlely

2005-06-07 [tenshi-ryuu]: cute? cuddley? I don't know if those two words apply to me...

2005-06-08 [The 5 Elements]: and using the words poofy, cute and cudly in a sentence together doesnt sound right

2005-06-08 [evil penguin]: hmmm, maybe it wasnt meant 2 sound right...lol

2005-06-08 [Your Favorite Stranger]: whu oh...*does the puppy face* but can we pwease call it mr. poofy anyway? pwease?

2005-06-09 [evil penguin]: o come on, no one can ignore the puppy dog face *does puppy dog face too*

2005-06-09 [tenshi-ryuu]: ya... sure... why not.... call me what you will...

2005-06-09 [evil penguin]: yay! thank u mr. poofy!

2005-06-09 [Moving on in Life]: *calls out* KILL MR POOFY! KILL HIM! HE HURT ME! AND TRIED TO KILL ME NUMEROUS TIMES! LOOK WHAT HE DID TO ME!

2005-06-09 [tenshi-ryuu]: Im sorry Terini... :(... It won't happen again, I promise...

2005-06-10 [Moving on in Life]: *Ok...Don't kill him....He still deserves to be punished, though....I say......Spank him and send him to his room!

2005-06-10 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you* well since you volunteered for the spanking, have fun! Mr. poofy, come here.

2005-06-10 [evil penguin]: ooo, can i help? i love a good spanking!

2005-06-10 [Moving on in Life]: I can't...I'm table-ridden because of him...Can't move.

2005-06-11 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh yeah...well then evil, ithink it's all yours, have fun!

2005-06-11 [evil penguin]: yay! *spanks tenshi for being bad, very bad*

2005-06-13 [tenshi-ryuu]: *yelps and runns in circles holding bum*

2005-06-13 [Moving on in Life]: *watches and laughs, then winces in minor pain*

2005-06-13 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *holding stomach on the floor laughing* hee hee hee!!!! you told him evil! *looks at terini* careful there

2005-06-13 [Moving on in Life]: I will be....

2005-06-14 [evil penguin]: *smile proudly*

2005-06-14 [Your Favorite Stranger]: you better be terini...*grins at evil and does the roman thumbs up* you go! that showed the devil

2005-06-14 [tenshi-ryuu]: roman thumbs up? is there a difference?

2005-06-14 [Your Favorite Stranger]: no i was just saying that. the romans started the idea of thumbs up at the coliseum: if a fighter had gotten the other fighter down, the biggest official watching would give thumbs up or down to say whether he lived or died

2005-06-15 [evil penguin]: wow, i learn something new every day

2005-06-15 [tenshi-ryuu]: cool.... its almost like the middle finger being an insult from the british in the medevil times... (I think.... or at least bows were still being used)

2005-06-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *has learned something new* really? how? i mean what'd they do?

2005-06-15 [tenshi-ryuu]: one of the old countries (can't remember which) that used to fight with the british, cut the middle or index finger off of any captured archers (since you used your middle and pointer finger to hold an arrow when shooting) and then let them go (since they were no longer a threat). So, the British archers used to hold up their index and pointer fingers (NOTE: two fingers instead of just the middle) as an insult to the other army saying they haven't been caught yet (this eventually evolved into just the middle finger)

2005-06-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs* i never knew that...figured someone just thought it up, or something...interesting...

2005-06-16 [evil penguin]: wow, where did u learn this random knowlege?

2005-06-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *thinks* you know, i can't remember...

2005-06-16 [tenshi-ryuu]: My Tech teacher is british, and told me about it... I later looked it up to verify it

2005-06-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i probably just read it somewhere

2005-06-16 [Moving on in Life]: I learn random knowledge such as that from bathroom reader books....Like, did you know that a squirrel lives an average of about 9 years?

2005-06-16 [evil penguin]: that i knew, but only because my best friends mom is deathly afraid of squirrels

2005-06-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: why?

2005-06-16 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol deathly afraid of squirrels? i think they're cute, but yeah, why?

2005-06-17 [Moving on in Life]: Good question, or how many points are on thew Canadian Flag? I can say, with sureness, that it's 11

2005-06-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: points?

2005-06-17 [tenshi-ryuu]: points on the maple leaf, on the Canadian flag, which I know as a fact its 11 since I wake up to it everymorning... ^_^

2005-06-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oh....you live in canada?

2005-06-17 [tenshi-ryuu]: yep ^_^... In Ottawa (well the outskirts of Ottawa)

2005-06-17 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oooo kool!!

2005-06-17 [Moving on in Life]: GOOD JOB, TENSHI! CANADIANS KICK ASS! *hi-fives tenshi all telepathic-like from the table*

2005-06-17 [tenshi-ryuu]: *high-fives Terini back*

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